英语作文写作技巧有答案

英语作文写作技巧新编

一．写作要求

1. 满足题目要求，不要偏题。中规中矩好过偏题。

2. 避免拼写错误，拼写错误会让老师对你的印象急剧下降，得分非常不好。

3. 段落结构很重要，三段式的文章是很容易写的，层次清晰，也是很受阅卷老师青睐

的文章。

4. 文章句子间的衔接词很重要，能给阅卷老师以全篇有序的感觉。

5. 难句的出现能展现自己的实力，让老师找到给你高分的理由。但要适可而止，避免

错误，不要适得其反。

6. 词汇尽量丰富，避免同一个词在同一篇文章中出现多次。

二．文章内容

1. 现象描述句

Recently, with the rapid development of （industry） （最近，随着工业的发展?.In recent years, there is a sudden increase in?

A great change has taken places everywhere in the past few decades?

2. 影响分析句

There are a number of effect of?, the 1st?2nd?.3?

It may cause serious consequences.（结果）

It will give rise to a lot of problems .

3. 建议句

It would be wise to? if we want to?

How can we? without?

The most effective way to solve these problems is?

4. 逻辑功能词扩充

次序

first, second, third, first and foremost, last but not least.

原因和理由

consequently, therefore, hence, thus, as a result of ,owing to this, on account of this.

目的in order to, so as to, so that, for the purpose of补充not only? but also, （不但…而且）furthermore, in addition, moreover, what’s more, besides, as well (as),

强调和重申

above all, in fact, in particular, particularly, most importantly, especially, that is to say, in other word

对比和转折

on one hand? on the other hand,（一方面..另一方面） in contrast with, whereas(然而；鉴之，反之)，on the contrary

让步

However , nevertheless（然而，不过，虽然如此）, yet, despite this,总述和收尾

all in all, in a word, in summary, in conclusion, to sum up， on the whole,

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二．文章分析

题目：近日你所在的学校开展了“为建设节约型社会献一计”主题活动，同学们提出了许多建议。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文向English Horizons杂志编辑部投稿：有人建议

1.不浪费粮食和纸张

2.尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋

3.毕业生将书赠给低年级同学循环使用？

Recently，there has been an activity of “doing your bit for an energy-saving society”in our school. Our schoolmates are highly concerned about the increasing lack of energy and provide their own suggestions.

Some students suggest that we shouldn’t waste any food or paper, though they appear very easy to get. Meanwhile, some other students think it advisable to

refuse to use disposable（用完即可丢弃的）chopsticks and plastic bags. Besides, it is also strongly recommended that those used textbooks as well as reference books of graduates, which are still in good condition, not be thrown but recycled. Actually, there are still quite a lot that we can easily do: try to take buses or ride bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. All of these will definitely help to build an energy-saving society.

三．实战演练

假设你是李红，你的一位美国笔友Robert写E-mail问及你高考后暑假的安排，请根据以下要点，写一封100词左右的email回复他, 可以适当增加细节。

1. 学开车 2. 参加英语培训课程 3. 去北京看奥运会 4. 游览北京的名胜

注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2.要准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思；3. 词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计入词数。

范文 (One possible version)

Dear Robert:

How time flies! The happy days we shared often shines in my memory. What about you?

As you know, my college entrance exam is approaching, which also announces the end of this sort of pressing study life. However，I intend to have a meaningful summer vacation. First, I will learn to drive to get a driving license, which is a new activity for a high school graduate in China. I will have a good rest, enjoying my hobbies. Then I will take some English courses to improve my English

communication ability, With the 2008 Olympics beginning, I will be a participant of it, watching the basketball match between China and the US. I have been

dreaming of Kobe’s performance long. After that, I will pay a visit to some tourist attractions to widen my horizon.

That is the plan for my vacation. I am looking forward to being told about your arrangements of vacation. Give me your quick reply soon, OK?

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